Thursday, April 3, 2008

hmm.

Project: dream bunny
Page: 74-79


So I have about 2000 words of confrontation that I'm not sure I want to keep. I wasn't sure I wanted to have it yet, but it just... sort of happened. I'm not that happy with it, or its timing, or its mechanics. I'll probably scrap it altogether and maybe recycle parts of it when I actually hit the actual confrontation (the disinheriting declaration)... but I'm just not thrilled with it. What's funny is that I do really like the final paragraph, on multiple levels. I might just highlight it now and make a decision later.

And man. I need a name. I'm so bad with titles.

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