hello, corner

Word count: 128345
Project: Beautiful


Sooo... I might have written myself into a corner?

I like Yanna and Janae talking about the twins, and their jealousies/feelings about internships and socializing.

I do not know what to do with Analinn and Jarik where I left them.

Pros: submission instinct; "overripe cherry on the sundae of why-we-shouldn't-work;" why he's so edgily overprotective; A over-compartmentalizing v. L under-compartmentalizing

Cons: feels weird; not sure I know how to write it; difficult


I... am probably just going to write, and worry about cutting/editing later. Ugh. I already have a list of scenes to add to flesh things out. I really like the story ratings chart. It's a good visualization. Needs more Yanna/Linnana. Janae/Analinn are paralleling really well; I need to get those two up as well.