blaaah.

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2113 tonight after the rewrite. Meh. I am NOT feeling it right now. I don't know how tolerable that scene is, but it's not the dregs that it was. That brings me up to 5369 total.

I liked Iyana reminding me that she's a cursed ex-mage, yes, but ex-mage as in she is no longer a member of the fraternity. She hasn't lost what (little) she had as an active mage. Meaning that she can in fact blow shit up without involving meteorological phenomenon.

Jarik demands to be written. BRB. 511 966 words later, Jarik is quiet just as his potential scene opens up. Probably went to bed. *sigh* Analinn, though, has handled the honeymoon present better than I saw coming. Awesomesauce. 144,714