finally~

Word count: 23686
Project: V&W

2541 tonight. I'm so happy about this. I'm actually really pleased with what came out, too. I did more or less follow the outline (perspective changed; event did not).

Three things:
I am unsure of when Nick and Ren are going to have That Talk, that eventually spurs the new level of connection that they need to win their big battle-y thingy. I might just do it next.

And,

I love Jared's introspection about superheroes and how he's getting gypped, and how everyone is very careful not to say how scared they are.

And,

The beginning of this sucks and is so getting cut. Or fixed. Or bumped down the timeline. I don't really care. It just can't stay the beginning.


Bedtime.