Project: meh
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It is. Megan's voice is more polished and stronger, and basically, it's reading less like a stream of consciousness and more like a novel. Yay. Of course, that could be because it's picking up speed and there are things she's actually describing and things that are happening to warrant the diction and syntax used, but hey. I won't fight it. Some of the scenes, though, if in third person I could have described so much better. Damn limitations of reasonable first person. I hate it, I do.
Maybe for NaNo I'll rewrite in third person. I wonder if that's legal?
4159 tonight, and I'm reminded how much I love her parents. 64,096 total.
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